This is definitively a very golden almost surreal piece to me. Maybe a little color would have helped to dimentionalize some aspects. That said, I think I need to get a towel to clean up this mess. Because you just blew my mind.
Yea much better for the colors ! For the static feeling, it's mostly because your lignes are too horizontal, maybe you could have added an other perspective point on the right side of the image to pull a bit the lines, to give a more dynamic feeling eventhough it is a very slow massive spaceship
Thanks yeh I will see what I can do, yeh bringing it to two point perspective would help, but would take alot of work, so maybe I can fake it by transforming the image and make it smaller to the right side, I probably also can rotate the image abit, creating a dutch tilt